#1
Hey everybody, this is a progressive piece that I just in fact finished a few minutes ago. I'm pretty satisfied with it but I would love to know what you guys think of it. All constructive criticism welcome . Thanks.
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Branches From Clouds.zip
Last edited by Jarusafes at Oct 16, 2009,
#2
Hey, thanks for the crit
good tune, sounded a bit random at parts but i still liked the melody. All the time signature changes kind of threw me off a bit. Bars 54 through 56 were cool but it could of been a bit more complex. The leads at bar 68 are pretty and the note choices are nice but again maybe some technique to add some soul into it. I like how you use lots of sus5 chords. It was good but needs work. 6.5/10