Victor V.
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2009
22 IQ
#3
Usually I will always say it is missing keyboards, but this time it really is.

I really liked the solos and all, but you need to work on the ambiance of the song. Maybe Strings, or Hapischord, with which you can even do a solo? Maybe an Organ?

Still, since it is from your band, I will suppose you don't have a keyboardist
Great work, though.
track122
Registered User
Join date: Aug 2008
77 IQ
#4
Thanks for the feedback. I don't really see myself writing anything with keyboard or harpsichord in it anytime soon, regardless of who's in my band. Maybe I could make up for that lack of ambient with a bass line, I have been pretty lazy with writing those :P.
NFXtreme
I'm Not Crazy
Join date: Oct 2006
795 IQ
#6
I like it. It's pretty fast and aggressive, I think a bass line would seriously help the feel of the piece, though.