#1
Logic?

Cops harass me every day
But I don’t regret the things I say
I know they live in mind delay
And they want to get me off the way

I don’t follow proper morality
I don’t forget the word solidarity
I detest the shut up normality
I can’t accept the comfort reality

Hello, my name is logic
I’ll hit you with my toxic
What I say may seem shocking
But it’s here
And everywhere near

And you ask me if I stand by peace
Well I have the right answer for this
Once the war we fight is won
Then I’ll destroy every gun

What the hippies stood for is dead
Now I have a bomb by my head
I’m sorry, it’s the only road
And don’t try scaring me with God

Hello, my name is logic
I’ll hit you with my toxic
What I say may seem shocking
But it’s here
And everywhere near
Every form of control over another person is a crime

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Last edited by KenMasters at Oct 12, 2009,
#3
ya good rap song but would the chorus sound better like

"very very near" instead of "everywhere near" ? just a thought thats the only line I didn't like
#5
Quote by KenMasters
Logic?

Cops harass me every day
But I don’t regret the things I say
I know they live in mind delay
And they want to get me off the way

Ok start. Structurally sound, just not overly exciting. Mind delay, meh.

I don’t follow proper morality
I don’t forget the word solidarity
I detest the shut up normality
I can’t accept the comfort reality

Last line was really nice, rest was a bit generic for a punk song but there's essentially nothing wrong with that

Hello, my name is logic
I’ll hit you with my toxic
What I say may seem shocking
But it’s here
And everywhere near

I'd go with the "very very near" suggestion, works alot better IMO, otherwise very good

And you ask me if I stand by peace
Well I have the right answer for this
Once the war we fight is won
Then I’ll destroy every gun

LOVE IT

What the hippies stood for is dead
Now I have a bomb by my head
I’m sorry, it’s the only road
And don’t try scaring me with God

Don't like the use of "Hippies", only problem though. Last line was nice.

Hello, my name is logic
I’ll hit you with my toxic
What I say may seem shocking
But it’s here
And everywhere near


Yeah. Couple word changes here and there and you've got a nice song going on.