I'm pretty happy with how this one turned out. It still needs vocals though. Comments on the song/mix will be greatly appreciated. C4C, etc applies. The song can be found on my profile.
Last edited by Pingis_Or_Death at Oct 12, 2009,
Intro riff is alright, drum part is standard but it fits well.

Second riff is pretty cool, reminds me of Death. Nice contrast between the drums and the slow and pacing guitar riff.

Third riff sounded like a Bloodbath esque time change... which would've greatly benefited from Mikael Akerfeldt's vocal supremacy.

Middle groove part is pretty nice. Again I would like some brutal vocals on this.

Ending is pretty tight. Overall pretty good. Playing was very tight, but obviously this would greatly benefit from live band and vox. Good job.