Found it boring (nothing interesting ever happened, and the repetitiveness as previously stated) and that it had no 'feeling'. The fact that it's not metal annoys me too.
Quote by aldo47
(i thought hot strings would make me finger faster.)
so i tried to set my strings on fire by putting a lighter on the high e string n it cut it so wtf??!!? i passed the lighter rrly slowly by it for less then a sec n then it snapped...
Last edited by Balmazer at Oct 12, 2009,
Errrr.... You used four notes for the entire song... oddly enough the root notes sometimes were in and out of major keys which is totally inappropriate for this style of music.

I don't really know what else to say about it. Very repetitive. You need to learn some more about theory / spend some more time with your instrument before attempting to write full length songs. Not trying to be rude, but we all need practice for song writing.