decent recording. pretty basic texture to capture there. im not really into the singer, but meh. thought the guitar was cool. group vocals sounded good. sometimes the guitar and the vox didnt match up on beat, esp in the group vocals part. maybe go by a metronome, or split up the song into separate parts so you can redo parts or make the two be on perfecting timing. a few times the vocals popped, like on the first word he says. get a screen or bring down the pops by a few dBs mixing. i kinda wish it had more layers to the song. seems thin, think more harmonies should go on, like strings and bass and stuff. but, i understand you work with what ya got, youre not the song writer here. keep at it, do experiments with overdubbing both instrumentally and with vocals.