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Hi man, nice flow. The lyrics come across smooth and unforced, better than some emcees I've heard on the radio for sure.

The guitar is good, really sets the mood. I think personally I'd prefer the beats to be a little more varied, but I can dig that you're going for a minimal vibe, so it's not really a criticism. The only thing that stood out to me was that there seem to be a few 'joins'. If it's intentional, I'd maybe add something to really emphasise it, because it kind of sounds like two segments pasted together. Hope that makes sense!

Nice tune though man. Have got you bookmarked to listen to your other stuff.

Check mine out if you've got time mate, here .