#1
Someday I'll sing a new song
with instruments of strings
that brings the fillment of dreams
Someday I'll play a new tune
to the beat of a drum
Singing and playing til judgement day come
Someday I'll strum a new phrase
Patiently waiting until that song plays

is this proper use of slant rhymes? I know drum and come arent but I liked it. I dont understand why rhymes are so looked down on everybody from system of a down to seal use them but anyway.
#2
ryhming is looked down apon? wtf? iv never heard that. well anyway i think its pretty good
#3
for me rhyming comes very naturally like my other songs but nobody seems to like them
everyone says its cheesy but what country songs arent? lol
#4
wow lol, how is ryhming cheesy? lol. i find it easy to rhyme to (maybe alittle to much sometimes lol) but songs have always ryhmed. they dotn have to every time but it helps