was pretty good i thought , probably ALOT better with a backing track i think the runs are a bit stale but thats just me , maybe instead of running down the scale miss out like every3rd note and replace it with a note on a higher string or something , just a suggestion but overall i liked it and thought it was good
Ha, that was pertty good, it was funny sounding though, weird effect there. I thought it sounded fine, no sour notes, very interesting.

crit mine? Don't know if its your style though.