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B
Behold my boundaries,
bending slopes and
boulders breaching the trust
of the ground, blending
into the beaches below.
Behold my benevolence,
my beckoning winds
and borrowed backdrops
from the birth of creation,
traced by blessed rivers,
beginnings of life, begging
to be embraces, to be loved,
by your own two feet.

C
Come walk my outline,
my crested snowy crown
awaits in cradled glory,
captivating your conception
of me.
Crated with catastrophes,
my castaway scarred faces
are as calm as the mountain I am,
calling to be cared for
with careful steps and
candid paces, creeping to
the essence of my need
to be climbed.

D
Delve into his desolate
deafening beauty; a devil’s hell
is dawning on this decaying land.
By day his depths will drown
our dented hearts, devoted
to the dyeing of his desert,
his dissolving docile crown.
Dethrone his reign with coloured doubt,
for we grow dreary as summer
departs and darts of snow
deploy, to be our dowry –
the dying of his pride.


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#3
This is a very creative and ingenius way of writing. It is fun and interesting to read. I haven't looked yet but just guessing how well writen this poem is, I am sure you have some real good poems :p Keep on Writing
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Wow, really awesome. I wish I shared the same vocabulary as you. It's a really nice poem and it really shows that you are a very competent writer.

a little lost.....
#6
Excellence...your skills far out reach mine.

This reminds me of the speech in V for Vendetta.

I tried this and did not fair too well.

E Exercise

Emancipated by the equestrians of the east
The eagles set out on an endeavor into the
Ecosystem of elderly edict
Eleven eagles rain earthbound from the skies
Eager for food, everything is prey
Elevated animals are eaten earliest
Then the feeble examine the effort
Eighteen elected warriors are on an enterprise
Exchange blows with the eagles as others evade
They will die, once equestrian emancipaters,
As eleven elected warriors of the east
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This reminds me of the speech in V for Vendetta.

IT DID ME TOO
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