#1
First post to S&L, but I think I might like it here. At this point it's a rough sketch of lyrics, and is still missing a bridge. I left the beat counts on the first line to show how the rhythm works a bit more. The first word or two usually acts as a pick up note to the rest of the sentence.

The words, (1) fell through (2) me hear them (3) hiss and moan (4)
Try to connect the understanding keep you on the phone
A little reflec-tion and I'm thinking how I'm all alone
Try to collect myself and leap into the, unknown

I got, more time, to realize
I got, pushed down through the lies
I became, what I despised and I
knew it when I saw your eyes
I thought, oh my, oh yes
There's, something burning in my chest
My hearts out so I can bleed
You saw me, you saw my need

'Cause you could be
The only one who saves me
From far away
The distance seems so long today
Don't get me wrong, I think I have your loving song
I'm sure, although, this world is the strangest place I know

And I, Make my way though the morning cigarette
As I, realize I haven't called you yet
So I, can't believe this girl is mine
Well uh, not quite yet but we'll be fine
I refuse, to believe
That I'm asleep and this ain't really here
And when I open my eyes, please don't disappear

And all the things
one forgets scream for help in dreams
From far away
The distance seems so long today
A boy like me, gets a girl like you it wrong you see
I'm sure, although, this world is the strangest place I know


C4C, thanks in advance
-D