Okay, I re-recorded it in full length this time, and uploaded it to my profile. No vocals yet. Still have to write the lyrics

Here's the link:


If you feel like listening to it, I'd be very grateful for some honest critique. C4C of course.

Oh, btw don't expect an anti-lovesong because of the title, because that's exactly what it is. A lovesong.

Last edited by xghost88 at Oct 15, 2009,
You need your guitar intoned and tuned.

In that order. It sounds like when you play high notes with the lower ones, that they are an 1/8 to a 1/4 out of step.

Not a bad tone though. Get some vocals on it.
You've got a good pair of ears there, bro!
I just went to the local guitar shop to get some new strings because the old ones have been played for quite a while now, and when I change them, I'll do the other stuff as well.
As I said, it was a spontanous recording this afternoon.

Anyway, appreciated man. I'm gonna start writing the lyrics soon, to get some vocals on it.