Not bad man, you have it down pretty much, I'd forgotten how much I LOVE that solo! One thing I will say though is that you need to dial down the distortion a bit. With a bit less it will sound killer!

Crit me?
@ irishman
well, personally, im that kind of guy who likes maximum gain distortion, but again i am using my effects pedal to get my distorted sounds

if i ever invest in some proper equipment (ie, a Peavey 5150 head, a good cabinet (maybe a Randall), and a good mic (Shure SM57 i think) ), ill probably redo some of these covers
Peavey 5150 (block lettered)
Mesa Boogie Traditional 4x12
Ibanez RG7620 w/ EMG 707s
Ibanez RG7321
Line 6 POD X3 Live