#1
I haven't been active in this forum for quite some time. (I'm sure you all missed me terribly lol). I haven't had much time to write but I came up with this the other day and figure I'd post. Crits appreciated and I will gladly return the favor. thanks all

Hey instigator
Why are you in this?
I’ve got a new girlfriend
Her name’s none of your business
And why do you care?
Don’t have better things to do?
Are you really over me?
Cause I’m damn sure as hell over you

Yeah you heard me right
So why don’t you get a move on with your life?

This is the last song that I will ever write about you
And you can sing along as I forget all about you
I’m so much better off without you

Hey flower child
Why don’t you go smoke your tree?
I don’t give a damn what you do
Just forget all about me
I don’t want to be your friend
I’ve already got enough
That might not seem fair
But hey life’s tough

Wear a helmet
Cause soon life will be crashing down on you

This is the last song that I will ever write about you
And you can sing along as I forget all about you
I’m so much better off without you
#2
The verses sound like something Dizzee Rascal might write. Pretty good though. The "This is the last song I will ever write about you" reminds me a bit of Foo Fighters, "This is the last song, that I will dedicate to you"
#4
I really like the line ..
Why are you in this?
I’ve got a new girlfriend
Her name’s none of your business

as for the helmet and life crashing down, you've got a good idea here, but not too sure i like where it headed. (no pun intended )

the chorus reminds me of "i wrote this song - secondhand serenade". That's just my style coming into play here, the chorus is nice. Probably my favorite part of the song.