#1
Hey, I need some ideas on what to write about because I just hit a major writer's block. Here's what I have so far. It's about a soldier fighting a war during the Apocalypse. Critique/suggestions are welcome, C4C also.

Apocalypse

Verse

Day by day, night by night
We hear the cries, the warriors’ fight.
When justice fails, the war prevails
When will this death ever end?

Into the valley of death we march
Blasted, bewildered, under the arch
Of tyrants and thieves, they’ll be glad to nail
You to pain that you can’t comprehend

Pre-chorus

As I lay you down
Say it to me now,
Or hold you peace forever

Chorus

My god I can’t imagine this,
You’re so far gone, you’re in a bliss.
Apocalypse!
Hellfire rain down
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#3
Please read through the rules, specifically regarding thread titles. Afterward you can post this again properly.

Thanks.