hey everyone check out my new song "Unsung" It's a demo of a song sung and played by our guitarist nick (me) the vocals were done when i was sick and i havnt gotten around to rerecording it
its on my profile
So, I just gave it a try and overall I like it. You should probably redo the vocals, when you're not sick anymore. How did you record that guitar? Sounds a little bit thin and low quality. But this might as well be due to my crappy notebook-speakers.
I liked the end a lot, with the second voice.

Please go to my profile and crit one of my songs preferably Lovesong, and/or the one called Come Fly.