Which one? theres 3 lol if its that first one then ya im working on fixing that too
rework more on the song i would say. there is no riff that is very memorable and the drums are well, Ok at the most. when you have put in two guitars, use them properly. bass seemed fine and your transition ( the 1st ) was abrupt, and the pinch harmonic doesnt fit in that well, use something lower. the 2nd riff is better than the first and the things get better there. but what was that? the chorus? it didnt fit in well mate. the solo part (tapping) was okay and i could hear some notes off scale, intentional? rest on seems decent
overall, can be made better and i give it 6.5/10
crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1216197
lol wasnt going for pop...i guess it will sound different once recorded...and a new chorus lol