master69
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Join date: Mar 2009
131 IQ
#1
This is a song that i've recently been doing a lot of reworking on and have just recently got to an almost finished project
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Judgement Day.mid
21Fretter
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Join date: Jul 2007
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#2
That chorus, presuming it's the chorus, doesn't fit at all.
master69
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Join date: Mar 2009
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#3
Which one? theres 3 lol if its that first one then ya im working on fixing that too
blackmagician
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Join date: Dec 2007
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#4
rework more on the song i would say. there is no riff that is very memorable and the drums are well, Ok at the most. when you have put in two guitars, use them properly. bass seemed fine and your transition ( the 1st ) was abrupt, and the pinch harmonic doesnt fit in that well, use something lower. the 2nd riff is better than the first and the things get better there. but what was that? the chorus? it didnt fit in well mate. the solo part (tapping) was okay and i could hear some notes off scale, intentional? rest on seems decent
overall, can be made better and i give it 6.5/10
crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1216197
21Fretter
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#5
Oh ja sorry, wasn't very specific :P The first one, it very pop-punky.
master69
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Join date: Mar 2009
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#6
lol wasnt going for pop...i guess it will sound different once recorded...and a new chorus lol