MadAudioMan
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Join date: Sep 2008
1,260 IQ
#1
Just my latest WIP, its a somewhat proggy, somewhat groove-oriented, somewhat RATM-esque song. And before anyone mentions them, yes there are some abrupt changes, and I like them that way. So don't bother saying they suck.

Also, some drum parts are missing, sorry

EDIT: Newer version up. I've got a second chorus put on. And added some drums here and there.

EDIT mkII: An even newer version is up! Except for a few breaks and the first verse, most of the drums are done. And the song has an ending. Its a 3:30 long prog song, go figure XD

I'm going to start a firestorm of reviews, I needz moar critz!

EDIT mkIII: GP4 version up, for those without GP5.
Attachments:
Deep1.gp5
Deepgp4.gp4
Last edited by MadAudioMan at Oct 25, 2009,
MadAudioMan
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Join date: Sep 2008
1,260 IQ
#4
Thanks for the crits. Martin, do you have a song for me to C4C? If so, just PM me. Also, I was indeed inspired by Porcupine Tree. Aswell as Tool, Rush and the Verse 2 riff is inspired by an early At The Gates song. Though the context of the riffs makes them sound completely different.
zachary-tfn
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Join date: Mar 2008
99 IQ
#5
Ah, dude, I wanna crit your song, but I have... A not too legal version of GP.
Could you post a GP4 file?
Thanks.
MadAudioMan
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Join date: Sep 2008
1,260 IQ
#6
XD, lets just say I don't have a perfectly acceptable version either, anyways, yeah, let me go get a GP4 file up.