Hey guys,

This is my bands first song we have written. We decided to do a very rough recording so that we could put it here for some advice for our first song. We had limited time to do this rough recording, so please note the extra bar in the first verse, some singing stuff ups (Done in 1 take, so not great quality) and just overall roughness.

We would really appreciate some feedback on our song.


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picture everyone naked with hot sauce being poured all over their body and then just think "i'm too good for hot sauce and all these naked people" then just do what comes naturally to you. it's all so simple
this looks familiar...like it was posted in other places or something....hmmm...

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seriously quit posting this everywhere man....it needs work by the way...a LOT of work...it's cool that you guys are trying to establish yourselves and jam and everything but keep polishing it; it needs it...now please quit posting this everywhere
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