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An atempt at writing some somewhat generic metal lyrics. I just want a simple, keep it or toss it. please! im to shy to show this to my band mates at the moment. C4C

[Verse 1]

Is it, you there, again,
You just keep showing up,
Have you, come back, for more,
Why can't you learn your lesson?
You've not-thing left, to gain,
Running away won't help you,
Cuz I've, killed you, before,

[Pre-Chorus]

So I'll, take this, bullet,
And load it in my gun,
Point it, at your, head,
should I pull the trigger?
Fortune, Favors Few,
And you are not of them,
Where are, you to, go,

[Chorus]

You are alone out here,
The path you walk will fade,
You've lost yourself to fear,
Now your always afraid,

[Verse 2]

Damn your, life to, hell,
It is a broken soul,
You will, never, mend,
To man- y peaces, torn,
You are, doomed to, fail,
With everything you do,
It's time, to make, a choice,

[Pre-chorus]

[Chorus]

[Bridge]

Your, life doesn't matter,
Still, don't mean a thing,
Falling, a dying angel,
Down, into hell,
You've, failed your mission,
Lost, sight of goal,
Your, spirit is tainted,
Wings, no longer soar,

[Guitar Solo]

[Pre-Chorus]

[Chorus x2]

[end...]

please tell me if they suck to much to keep.
Last edited by Uber Man at Oct 19, 2009,