Good work mate. Needs to be polished, good drumming, good vocals, the song gets confusing at time. Loving the double kick beats mate

Would you mind checking my bands song out? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1217270

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picture everyone naked with hot sauce being poured all over their body and then just think "i'm too good for hot sauce and all these naked people" then just do what comes naturally to you. it's all so simple
I didnt like the intro, there was a very sour note that kept being played, and I'm not a fan of the screaming. But looking at it from a musical standpoint, it was great, very well excuted, the drums sounded great. I give it an A for originality.

Crit mine?
Hey man, though it's not my genre of expertise I can definitely tell you guys have some chemistry in playing together. The song is pretty tight and focused (good work on the drums) and it seems to have a direction. I actually liked the intro quite a bit. Nothing wrong with a bit of organized dissonance.

edit: oh yeah, check out my toaster strudel vs. pop tart project if you can! thanks