#1
Hey guys,

This is my bands first song we have written. We decided to do a very rough recording so that we could put it here for some advice for our first song. We had limited time to do this rough recording, so please note the extra bar in the first verse, some singing stuff ups (Done in 1 take, so not great quality) and just overall roughness. Excuse the guitar and bass tone aswell, but please give us ideas on how to improve them.

Next week we will properly record it.

We would really appreciate some feedback on our song.

Thanks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5jjTdWDwiI8
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#2
jesus christ, the song sucks already, stop spamming it.

*Reported*
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#3
O,O you want to sound like a rat?
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not that thats a bad thing...

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#4
your lead singer sounds like gohan from dragon ball z
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#5
you have posted this like a million times already.
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#6
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your lead singer sounds like gohan from dragon ball z



Anyway, same thing I said on the video comments:
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Bass is awesome. I reccoment the guitarist beefs up the sound a little, maybe adding an octave below. Some wah in the verse and phaser/flanger in the chorus would add alot. And for the RATM sound, whammy pedal in the solo is a must.


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#7
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Anyway, same thing I said on the video comments:


aha we just watched a 10 minute dragonball z movie to see that :/ he kinda does
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picture everyone naked with hot sauce being poured all over their body and then just think "i'm too good for hot sauce and all these naked people" then just do what comes naturally to you. it's all so simple