Sounded pretty decent, although there wasn't really anything progressive about it. I like it though, keep working on it.

It was the only task I would undertake...

...to reap the harvest that was mine

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Carry on with the lead but bring in some basic power chords with the jazz guitar (but change to distortion or overdriven). Might open some doors for building it up.
Wow, that was cool. Keep working on it.
The drums were good and the rhythm is a nice touch. But the solo is awesome...the sweept at bar 25 gave me goose bumps..but seriously stop using Midi there are awesome tones in the RSE... if you dont have RSE get it ..just go to RSE menu and instead of amp tones use legend tones..really good ones there
8/10 for the solo