alright, so I'm not sure if this song will fit into the story of my apocalyptic concept album, but I'm not sure how the transitions and riffs work. I've been listening to this all day long and need an outside opinion. it's the song "twisted" on my band's profile (see sig)

it's the first part of the song, the intro and first verse. I just want a response as to how the riffs are and how the flowing works. also if that clean w. growled style of vocals fits (vocals are terrible, I know. I have a cold right now so it's really hard, just the general idea)

oh, and C4C, of course.
Last edited by CoreysMonster at Oct 18, 2009,
Pretty cool.

I think it flows pretty well. I can't really hear the guitars though, boost your mids a bit.
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