#1
I've started writing again. I'd appreciate any opinions.

Here's my first one. It's about this girl. It's basically about where we are and where we could be.

Waiting
Time wasted adds up to nothing
Silence
Words unspoken that could really mean something
Pain
Built up inside continues to grow
Regret
For how much longer, nobody knows

And the second one. It's nowheres near done but it's a start. It's about another girl (figures :p). I'm actually writing it for her. We started off great but in the end nothing is going to work out. To much pain.

At first it seemed like this would never die
Now I'm here telling you my last goodbye

What do you think? Anything I should add/change? Please be honest, I can take it.
#2
Please take a look at the forum rules, specifically regarding thread titles and what your thread should contain. Afterward you can re-post this properly.

Thanks.