#1
I have written 3 new songs for some good ol' crit!
Im working on a solo ep.

I am breathless-- http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/mikevmpr3/music/all/play720134

It wont hurt a bit-- http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/mikevmpr3/music/all/play720011

Must have been A miscommunication-- http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/mikevmpr3/music/all/play720373

[edit]--Love Loss And Chaos-- http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/mikevmpr3/music/all/play720706
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Horizon Devices - Precision Drive
AMT D2 Preamp
Boss TU-2
Boss- CS 2
BBE- Green SCREAMER
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Last edited by mikevmpr3 at Oct 20, 2009,
#2
As i play the songs

Breathless - Sick tone, nice grooves goin. Really short clip so im afraid i cant offer much for it :p

It Wont Hurt A Bit - The production is a little fuzzy, the intro riff is mean along with tasteful use in the double bass, liking the riff starting at 1:10 reminds me of old school Nirvana over Hardcore music, the next part has a trippy lead, the break gets a little repetitive but nothing bad, the ending riff isn't that exciting, but the drums give it a mean feel. Nice work

Miscommunication - The intro harmonized riff was cool, liking the sludgy riff at 0:57, overall solid song

Crits - I definitely see you like the slow mean hardcore kind of feel. A faster section (not tempo, just faster notes and such) could help to break some monotony, but thats more a matter of style. The structures may need to undergo some tweeking if you were going to add vocals but i dont get the feeling you were going to.

I enjoyed listening, these were actually a ton better than i was thinking :p
If you get the time crit my song Vice
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1218411
Last edited by Shustermeister at Oct 20, 2009,
#3
I am breathless: Great riff, superb tone. The sound of the guitar is sweet and very nice. The song has potential.

It won't hurt a bit: I like the tone in this one as well, nice distortion. The riff is pretty sweet has a certain "frantic" atmosphere. The transitions are really well done. The drums are cool in this track, very br00talz

Must have been A miscommunication: Nice intro, followed by a pretty cool riff. I enjoyed this song, once again the drums and guitar go together perfectly! Good song.

All in all, the songs sound good, they have tons of potential. Keep up the good work!

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1217504
#4
I am Breathless- Very heavy tone, the drums did overpower the song, but the progression was really cool, it does have some pontiential.

It Wont Hurt a Bit- Likeing it so far, its very heavy, and good chord progression, but my only complaint is that there isent enough going on, mabey bring in a lead guitar every now and then to break up the song a bit.

Must of Been a Miscommunication-Again, very heavy tone, and a good chord progression, and again I would bring some more lead guitar into the mix to break it up.

Overall, Its pertty good, you just need to add more lead parts to your song. And a something for all the songs, you use way too much bass drum, at first thought there wasent any snare drum in there, but its there, its just really back there. I would try to use less bass drum, and more toms, get a good mix of both of them, toms and bass drums really bring out a song in my opinion. But just bring forward your symbols and snare drum and it will be fine.

You style really reminds me of the music from Quake 2.

Crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1217310
#5
Quote by ethan_hanus
I am Breathless- Very heavy tone, the drums did overpower the song, but the progression was really cool, it does have some pontiential.

It Wont Hurt a Bit- Likeing it so far, its very heavy, and good chord progression, but my only complaint is that there isent enough going on, mabey bring in a lead guitar every now and then to break up the song a bit.

Must of Been a Miscommunication-Again, very heavy tone, and a good chord progression, and again I would bring some more lead guitar into the mix to break it up.

Overall, Its pertty good, you just need to add more lead parts to your song. And a something for all the songs, you use way too much bass drum, at first thought there wasent any snare drum in there, but its there, its just really back there. I would try to use less bass drum, and more toms, get a good mix of both of them, toms and bass drums really bring out a song in my opinion. But just bring forward your symbols and snare drum and it will be fine.

You style really reminds me of the music from Quake 2.

Crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1217310


to be honest im no drummer haha, i arranged it on beatcraft. I was going for in alcatraz 1962 drum set. i just added a 4th song check it out =)
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--The GEAR--
Horizon Devices - Precision Drive
AMT D2 Preamp
Boss TU-2
Boss- CS 2
BBE- Green SCREAMER
ESP,LTD MH- 250 NT ,
fitted with SEYMORE DUNCAN NAZGUL AND SENTIENT
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