geRitseder esUr
Join date: Jul 2006
351 IQ
I never mess around with major keys, so here it is. Its kind of upbeat, but with broken time signatures... a bit different. crit for crit, be honest, and i'll be honest with you.

tell me what you think
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The Arsis
UG Freak
Join date: Feb 2009
2,378 IQ
Bar 20 - 28 I like this riff, it has a very happy and warm feeling/ theme to it.
Bar 76 - 79 This part is a great fill.
Bar 83 - 90 I don't know how you came up with this part but that is just simply an amazing clean bit. Very well done.
Bar 99 - 101 I like the minor turn you take.

Overall, I think this song is an upbeat masterpiece. A great mood shifter and fun song to listen to. You must have a lot of skill to create and perform this piece.