velocet
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Join date: Jan 2009
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#1
This is the second song I've been working on with GP5. It is missing drums, Mainly because I'm not very knowledgeable about drums and how to use them yet. And It's missing some transitions. It has a lot of ideas i like and want to work with, I would just appreciate some help and criticism. If you like, let me know and maybe we could collab on some stuff!
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ChemicalFire
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Join date: Oct 2007
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#3
If I'm honest I found it too slow and too simple, it was pretty boring.

Not much more I can say than listen to more metal, get some more ideas down, and perhaps speed it up a bit.
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Mullen2105
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#4
Firstly get out of the drop tuning. if you start making riffs in standard tuning and stop relying on the open power chord you'll sound more out of the box. it sounds like slipknot to be honest.
velocet
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#5
Well I don't even really listen to metal, just playing around with some ideas =P
ChemicalFire
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#6
Quote by velocet
Well I don't even really listen to metal, just playing around with some ideas =P


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valdean
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#7
I'm bored, so I added drums to it. Just something simple.
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velocet
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#8
Quote by valdean
I'm bored, so I added drums to it. Just something simple.

RAD!!! Thanks much for that =P really digging what you contributed.