#1
I don't have a camera atm so I just uploaded it on a myspace music page -

http://www.myspace.com/aildcovers

Tell me what you think .

The open palm mutes are alternate picked, I'm working on the downpicking ( at 200 bpm so far.. 30 more to go ).
#2
really good man, but your donwpicking needs to be a little faster in the breakdown section, but you already said that you're working on it so... keep practicing