DarK666SiM
Registered User
Join date: Aug 2007
487 IQ
#1
Here's my first 2 compositions. I need feedbacks to improve myself please!
The song viking took me little over a week to do but I've worked a lot harder on the other one (which is not finished).

EDIT: I now finished the Dark prog metal song if anyone want to comment the ending!

(I'm sorry for the bad English)
Attachments:
viking.gp5
compo 1 (dark prog) (1).gp5
Last edited by DarK666SiM at Oct 22, 2009,
lord_nosfuratu
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2009
362 IQ
#2
I gotta say in the first song you had some epic sounds leads. The solo sounded great and you had very evil sounding chords going on there. Although some of them seemed pretty difficult to play on actual guitar. The end for me was a tad abrupt but overall pretty sick song.

Viking has the sickest lead line from bars 34 to 41. Totally epic sounding. The intro acoustics sounded great too. The breakdown with the strings sounded awesome and the folk part was epic. Overall i think i enjoyed this song more than the first.

Great songs dude
Scythuz
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2007
45 IQ
#3
I really like these songs. Dissection comes to mind quite a bit and I think thats a worthy comparison to make Keep it up!
Lifes all good till you're dead