at first i was like "holy shit this sounds so much like the original" and i thought you were doing all the screaming and stuff lol but yeah thats just you playing along with the actual song. you play it pretty well i guess from what i can hear. i think you should try to put a noise gate because i can hear your distortion humming through on certain parts. uhhmm i think you should try to do a cover without playing along with the song though. maybe make your own drum track or something.
^ setup = Pod X3 + Jackson DKMG w/ Emg 81/85's

I would turn up the guitar, but the guitar isn't the focus of the song, the vocals are.

I'll probably upload another one with louder guitar though anyway.