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Hi everyone at UG, this is my first ever post, I'm going to post some lyrics I wrote recently inspired by a holiday romance I experienced in Thailand Open to critique, slate it or love it, i welcome all of your opinions

Flying above the clouds, Jamming in the rainbow,
So close to heaven I perceive the halo,
Of an angel with her wingspan stroking my soul,
Turns everything she touches into gold

Look to the sky for a glimmer of hope,
My hands are slipping on this twisted rope,
Twist and turn while we watch the world burn,
To fill the void is what I yearn for,
Nobody listens when the clouds downpour,
Searching for a secret among the dust,
Pray for sanity before I turn to rust

Flying above the clouds, Jamming in the rainbow,
So close to heaven I perceive the halo,
Of an angel with her wingspan stroking my soul,
Turns everything she touches into gold

Is she far or near, tormenting my fears,
Oh no, no tears fall from shame,
There's only me to blame,
Now I am one with the flames,
And I burn eternally watching over you,
Your smile is what gets me through,
Remember me,
Oh tenderly.

I have written and recorded this song with my friend, the guitar work is decent, john frusciante-esque, if you want a copy just email me and i'll get back to you! x