Heath843
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Join date: Feb 2009
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#2
sounds good but a some rhythem in the back with a little distortion would make it better
21Fretter
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#3
Enjoyed it a lot. Didn't like the final Eminor though

Def carry on working on it.
Last edited by 21Fretter at Oct 22, 2009,
sammo_boi
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#5
you could keep that same thing repeated once more and do an acoustic solo over it. i think it should stay acoustic for as long as possible, like nothing else matters. only the solo is distorted.
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Last edited by sammo_boi at Oct 22, 2009,
Purves
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#7
I really quite liked this.

The tempo was good and everything sounded quite steady, obviously an actual recording would kick buttocks but it's still good.

And just as a bit of opinion, I don't think you could go wrong with something like a small acoustic solo, you know, just a small part if anything. Just an opinion though feel free to ignore it!
Plaeghdraeger
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#9
that reminded me of some Blind Guardian songs Very cool stuff!
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faiksener
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Join date: Aug 2009
45 IQ
#10
I was influenced my Blind Guardian and Metallica
zetto129
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Join date: Oct 2009
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#11
sound great but i think that in part:

e||-----------------------------------|-----------------------| 
B||-----------5--5--6--5h-6p-5--------|-----------3----5------| 
G||--7-------------------------7--(7)-|--5--------------------|
D||-----7-----------------------------|-----5-----------------|
A||--5-----5--------------------------|--3-----3--------------|
E||-----------------------------------|-----------------------|


it sounds better and rhytmic when you use triolas:
         
                       |--3--| (3 sixteenth note)                                    
E||-------------------------------|-----------------------| 
B||-----------5--5--6--5h-6p-5----|-----------3----5------|
G||--7-------------------------7--|--5--------------------|
D||-----7-------------------------|-----5-----------------|
A||--5-----5----------------------|--3-----3--------------|
E||-------------------------------|-----------------------|


try it

but i like it much
faiksener
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Join date: Aug 2009
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#12
ok i fixed that part and now it sounds better, i just need an acoustic solo, and im working on it.