#1
I know this belongs in the lyric forum but I figured people in here would relate more to it. This is the first song I've ever wrote btw. I used as much metaphors as I thought of. I wrote it on my Ipod touch
Here it goes. I got some idea's from other songs I know it may sound like rap.

There she is lying there, I can no longer stare. Pick her up with loving care.
What I love the most, she gets my vote. Note by ntoe, toke by toke. I provoke it to take me away, for I don't wanna stay. Just get me lost in from the real world holocaust. Take me away from reality for now I see you bring out the best in me.
Nothing but imagination, the best musical creation,When we make love its like levatation, You are my revelation.
You can be dangerous, the rain of us, you make me lust, take away my rust.
I must bust and pull the flow you wanna go with what the dice rolls, only god knows what you can do to any real fool.
Every minute im away from you, I feel like theres nothing else to lose. Can't play I say please god why is she away?
My baby takes away the sadness lurking. Yes, my soul is working.
Full of energy, it emptys knee caps, makes me collapse.
Fills chest cavities and turns up gravity, Amazed from what I see, The emotion drawn amazes me.
The end is near. I hear footsteps as I prep to recieve an intercept from the groove that makes me move.
Door opens, Heart closes.
I tell em to f*ck off, we're in the middle of something.
I get the rythem bumpin, heart starts pumpin.
Lost in the music, playin different licks, doing every trick.
Every note I pick, takes away every prick, heals every nick.
Lost in the groove, I don't need anything to prove.
Make her sad, make her mad. Bangin heads, not shoots leads. So many hands in the air, give the crowd a stare. Give em what they need. I take the lead. Nothing but speed, Heads banging indeed. This is what everybody needs.
Too many cease the musical relief.


So whatchu guys think? Please read if you skipped to the bottom. It was basically a freestyle even though I don't rap.
Turtles R awesome. dont agree? YOU GO TO HELL, YOU GO TO HELL AND YOU DIE!


PSN: Purple-munky

Gear...
Ion - acoustic guitar.
Cort KX1Q - i smashed it
Fender Super Champ XD 15w
Stagg G-310 - i smashed it.
#3
I'll move it. Anybody know how to copy and paste manually? The right click is messed up.
Move for me if you want mods.
Turtles R awesome. dont agree? YOU GO TO HELL, YOU GO TO HELL AND YOU DIE!


PSN: Purple-munky

Gear...
Ion - acoustic guitar.
Cort KX1Q - i smashed it
Fender Super Champ XD 15w
Stagg G-310 - i smashed it.
#4
Select what you want to copy, CTRL+C to copy, CTRL+V to paste.
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