#1
C4C

maybe a metal song who knows.

Screaming, Kicking
No way out
sometimes I feel like washing my brains out
with this .30 cal
it would be so easy
to pull this trigger.
look at all the stains now
but no cant even do this, thats the easy way out
kicking, screaming
No way out
sometimes I feel like kicking your teeth out
it would be so easy,
to introduce the curb to your mouth.
look at you now
but no cant even do this, that's the easy way out
Screaming kicking
no way out
one of these days I'm gonna kick my conscious out
it would be so easy.
Kicking screaming
better look out.
#2
I like the violence of it- made me laugh in that twisted way. It kinda reminds me of older Slipknot songs. But I can't tell if you're fighting yourself or someone else. Other than that, it's brilliant; even better as it doesn't follow the traditional song structure, and it's quick and furious.
No C4C, most of my songs go against the rules.