cptazad
Jeff Loomis is God
Join date: Jan 2006
1,704 IQ
#1
wrote it quick style

loving the drums

love the last solo

c4c as always, apologies to the last post I made I missed doing a crit on someone that had critted me won't happen again
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"Our revenge so everlasting sweet,
Enslave your Children, Behead the weak,
Kill every last Man, Woman and Machine
The cleansing has begun.
Your meek defense is foolish,
we come from the stars a trillion strong."
AngrySockMonkey
Straight Outta Compton
Join date: Oct 2007
1,354 IQ
#3
Sounds very Souls To Deny-era Suffocation influenced .

The core half time parts were a bit too cliche and modern for the style that I anticipated after the pre-verse/verse rif***e. I was expecting insanely extreme wall-of-sound brutal death metal and was a disappointed when the cheesy minor third harmonies and half-time drum beats came in.

Chorus shredding is a little much and seems ****ing insanely difficult, but it admittedly sounds pretty awesome aha .

Fading interlude is unique. Not much to say, nice here.

Solo is pretty sweet. Nothing new or innovating really, just a stock shredding, sweep raping death metal solo, but it was pulled off very well and sounds xxXbr00tuh1zzzX!1!1

8/10 - Don't enjoy the modern edge to this song because I find it doesn't fit well with the mood you set up initially.
We can only guffaw at all the humbug we are told about martyrs.