#1
We were meant to be here.
Glistening willows at the edge of the Earth told us so.
Your boy would say no (but he does that and
That is why you choose me)
And you comply with a
kiss and fingers twisted so I know
There's no truth in your mouth right now
(just his tongue, how disgruntled I must be)
We'll pay for our choices
As you seek out lips and
I hope you will
Embalm me.
I know you think that I'm someone you can trust.
But I'm scared i'll get scared and i swear i'll try to nail you back up.



Female SouperHero
#2
I like it! I had to read it a few times to get the gist of it, but I think I got it. I like the rhyme scheme, though it doesn't flow as well in the last four lines.

And you comply with a
kiss and fingers twisted so I know

I really like these two lines. the internal rhyming with kiss and twisted is great. Though it seems the first line should break at comply. Also, maybe consider switching fingers and twisted? That way you have that repetition almost immediately, though I think it sounds great the way it is, too. Overall, good job, I liked it.