#2
Nice work man, I think you should work on your tone in the beginning a little bit though, other than that, it's awesome... How did you do the drums? I wanna learn how to do that to my songs


Here's my most recent song, and I have one other of my originals on YouTube as well, just check out my channel if you feel so inclined.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6JtQqMlA3a8
Keep it up dude!
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#3
the beginning sounds a lot like the stuff i write. really nice. the two guitar parts at the at the beginning interacted well with each other. the sweeping sounded crazy. very smoothly played too. i wish it had a bit of a bolder tone however but maybe that's just me. i also really liked how it was a thought out piece and not just shredding from start to finish but the transitions seemed a bit abrupt to me.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1220400 there's my newest piece if you want to listen/crit
#6
cool title man. nice tone. i like the stumming pattern. its okay but it becomes great when the lead kicks in. for some reason i think bells would sound good with this. like right before the drums kick in? maybe im just weird. good stuff though and great playing. nice little jam. im diggin it.

how long u been playing?

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22094129#post22094129