#1
I've been hitting a lot of poetic road blocks lately. Finally, I had the inspiration for a new song. C4C, as always.

Some days
Like these days
I never quite feel like myself
Anymore

And some nights
Like these nights
I never can think of anything
But you anymore

Just as it always ever was
And as it always ever will
Drowning memories of us
In deeper seas of smoke and pills
#2
I think it's good... I'm not really a critic but it's better than what I could come up with. The influences are obvious, but I think with music and depending on your singing style it could work well.