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Hey S&L crew! I guess none of you would remember me since my last piece was around two years ago but here's something to start up my writing again.

I'll try to crit for crit.
Thanks.

Saves me Pain

Someone talked to me today
Said I should have just left you out of mind
I just didn't really know what to say
Gotta just accept failure this time

Now that you know I'm alive
Even if you forget my name
And when I stop talking to you
I hope it at least saves me pain

And even if I become famous
You still wont remember my name
You never really gave me a chance
So now I lost in every way

Now that you know I'm alive
Even if you forget my name
And when I stop talking to you
I hope it at least saves me pain

Remember that one time I asked you
If this whole thing still made you sigh
"No" is the answer you gave me
I guess it was all just a lie

Now that you know I'm alive
Even if you forget my name
And when I stop talking to you
I hope it at least saves me pain

I hope it at least saves me pain
I hope it at least saves us pain
I hope it at least saves you pain