#1
i never have anything to say about the world
when my life is going just fine.
so right now I have no complaints
and i don't bother to take the time to notice
everything going on.

The teen in his room crying cause his girlfriends gone,
the homeless guy watching people pour money in the fakers hat,
the junkie giving up their sexuality to score some dope.
All this I would've had something to say about not to long ago,
but now I only notice that I have no problems
nothing to complain about
and a place to call home.

The truth is I can relate to all three
but I just don't want to.
call it selfish
I'll just call it a day.
Last edited by bluesybilly at Oct 25, 2009,
#2
I like what you are saying, and you said it well for the most part, but i think you could have done better on the descriptions in the first three lines of the second verse. actually, having read you before I know you could have.
i need to hear some sounds that recognize the pain in me, yeah.
#3
"The truth is I can relate to all three
but I just don't want to.
call it selfish
I'll just call it a day."

Brilliant ending. The rest before was good, nothing that really grabbed though.