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I am writing a new song, I have a rough recording of it on my profile under "Seven to One (aka Work in Progress)" I wrote it for my (now ex) Girlfriend.

I have yet to add bass (I don't have one, but I am going to try to use my RP-350's octaver to make one) and drums (I don't much about programming full drum parts, and I don't have a way to make real drumtacks. If you want to help, just PM me.)

I need advice on the arrangement ETC....

Any other Crit on other tracks is welcome too & C4C, of course!