If I had to offer any criticism id say work on your vibrato, they could be a little more tight/focused. Not an easy song, thought it was very well done.
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If you're EQ'd loose, you'll sound loose anyway.
You've only been playing for a year?

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Momie's like not even a real person, just an asian, lesbian spirit.
I'll work on vibrato.

Yeah, I've been playing for a year and a month or so.
Are the sweep picking any good?

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