pretty good, but you should learn without the piece of paper on the neck. i know it's tough cause they ring, but it's good practice without. if you want to hear how i played it, it's in my profile. except it's the full song.
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I agree. trying it without the paper really gauges it to perfection. A way much better than using paper that works so you can do the entire song is to take a hair scrunchie and pull it over the headstock to slide on and off the fretboard. try watching Tim from protest the hero when he's playing he's got one on his guitar neck.