#1
I hope some of you will enjoy this song I wrote, it may sound very abstract, and, well it is i suppose, but also I would love to hear what some of your perceptions are and what you feel like it means or means to you. Thanks in advance.


Consciously Oblivious

I’ve had this feeling once before,
Couldn’t describe it for a second or more
I’ve seen this scene a time or two,
Couldn’t tell if it was me or you
Stubbornly and scornfully they become wasted,
Away in the cradle, a life they could have tasted.
Sweet and sticky just like me,
Emotionless emotions, oh so slippery


9:30 and your still in your room
Hoping that life wont leave you so soon
Left behind, what are you to do,
Follow me boy, Ill help you make it through
I got a suspicion once upon a time,
Plastic trees seem to never unwind,
We’re all home come peace of mind
Im coming to you boy, myself and mankind


Been waiting so long at the end of this line
For the ticket to watch the entirety of my life
My life and the life that I live everyday
Oh you’ve got to know
Oh you’ve got to know
How its gonna be be for you and me
How its gonna be to live my life free
My life and the life that I live everyday
Oh you’ve got to know
Oh you’ve got to know


As the boy walked into the corner store
He stepped in the puddle and continued no more,
Stopped in his tracks, caught a privileged glimpse,
Of space that to most just doesn’t make sense
A simple hello was thrown to the kid,
He said hey Jim, see what I just did
Jim was a man much more than most,
A man we will call our modern day ghost


Been waiting so long at the end of this line
For the ticket to watch the entirety of my life
My life and the life that I live everyday
Oh you’ve got to know
Oh you’ve got to know
How its gonna be be for you and me
How its gonna be to live my life free
My life and the life that I live everyday
Oh you’ve got to know
Oh you’ve got to know


From this moment on, Jim was at the boys’ side
Helped him from the rocks, choosing an inward ride
Gliding through his mind became an everyday thing,
Reaching ahead, too far to be a dream
Reality became the past, far and gone
He had found Jim, his consciousness withdrawn
He took off, amazed by the extra room
For he had discovered, what many can only hope to assume


Been waiting so long at the end of this line
For the ticket to watch the entirety of my life
My life and the life that I live everyday
Oh you’ve got to know
Oh you’ve got to know
There’s so much, so much to know,
Dive in youself and let your mind finally grow
Let yourself know
Let yourself know
#4
yea, it flows quite well with the guitar i wrote with it. And yea, I know this is the wrong forum, the other forum just gets so few views compared to this one unfortunately.
#5
Link it to your profile in your sig then. That's what other peeps do.
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