Its not finished yet, but I need some opinions!

Do you think it flows all right from the main part to the verse? Sounds a bit iffy to me...

Any others ideas and thoughts are welcome too. I've got a bit of a creative block

C4C of course.
Sick shit.gp5
sounds pregood to me

i dont think id change a thing
Pedal GAS?
Empress Heavy
ISP Dec of some sort
Keeley Katana
TC Corona/Vortex/Dreamscape