#1
owat. ive wrote lots of little thing just when they jump at me...this is the first ive ever typed and worked on... just tell me what y'all think (this ain't pro, just something that came in spontaneity)

its capo 4, just G-C-D-C...pinky on 5th fret high e on first C


Angel come back to me
Come back from the sky
You left me here by myself
When you learned you could fly

You soared up as high as you could go
Never looking back
At the shattered crowns below
As the sun shines off the diamonds and the pearls
You fly away from this broken world

Angel ive lost sight of you
But your memory still remains
You trapped me in your sea of blue
Fought away all the pain


And You soared up as high as you could go
Never looking back
At the shattered crowns below
As the sun shines off the diamonds and the pearls
You fly away from this broken world

And you flew up way up into the sky
Up to the place where noone else can cry
And im down here, picking up these broken crowns
To give to you when you finally come back down
#3
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Hi

Head on up to the announcement at the top of this forum.
Please read the rules, particularly regarding titles.

Thanks.


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This. Thanks.

You can re-post it properly after.