This is a song I wrote recently, I was hoping to hear some comments on it. Recorded the vocals in Sonar and did all the other work in FL Studio.

Hope you all like it. Or not.

Its pretty depressing.


Enjoy, friends.

Thanks for listening, man. Glad you liked it.

You brighten up my day.

shit man.. that's really good.
a really nice slow paced easy going song, it actually sounds really professional.
very impressed.
sounds really good
the lyrics are a bit cliché
but i'm not really one to judge seeing as mine are pretty cliché too ^^
hard to come up with anthing else when someones always on your mind...

back to the music,
it does really sound like a professionel recording
you should try adding an acoustic guitar, it good liven up the song abit,


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