#1
Verse
Its you
That i'm talking bout,
Your the one standning there
With your fingers in your hair,
Acting unaware,
Of the damage that you've caused
To my head and my heart
But that is just the start..
Cause

Chorus
When I think its over
You came back again
The way always do,
On your hands and on your knees
You are my disease
And I just cant can't get enough
But this has got to stop
Enough is enough

Verse
Cause its you,
Thats on my mind again
And it really isn't fair,
The way you just stand there,
Playing with your hair,
The way you know I like,
And here I go again,
Its all part of your plan

Chorus
When I think its over
You came back again
The way always do,
On your hands and on your knees
You are my disease
And I just cant can't get enough
But this has got to stop
Enough is enough

Bridge
And its you again,
Whys it always you,
Your always on mind,
I just can't say no,
I Just can't say NO!!!

Chorus
Cause when I think its over
You came back again
The way always do,
On your hands and on your knees
You are my disease
And I just cant can't get enough
But this has got to stop
Enough is enough
The times are changing
Last edited by narners at Oct 29, 2009,
#3
this sounds really amateur.the rhyming is very forced and the vocabulary is pretty basic.this topic has been done so many times its hard not to lose concentration reading this piece as everything in it has been said before.try taking a different view of the situation or varying the rhyming or using better imagery because as it stands this is a pretty dull piece

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