ParadoxEmpire
Lord of GP5
Join date: Jan 2009
234 IQ
#1
Here's Another Song From Paradox Empire... This Is An Old One, But Nevertheless It's Good I Think. C4C As Usual. I Hope You Will Enjoy. Also, We Would Enjoy If You Could Suggest A Name, The Lyrics Are About Death Penalty. We Can't Find Any Proper Title. Better With RSE. Thanks!
Attachments:
Drummer Boy W intro W Bass.gp5
Drummer Boy W intro W Bass.gp4
Drummer Boy W intro W Bass.mid
Rainy Afternoon
Dark Punk Piece
Dead On The Sand
C4C
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Last edited by ParadoxEmpire at Nov 6, 2009,
ultrasonic
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Join date: Apr 2008
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#2
That dear sir, was pretty amazing, I loved the fast paced feel to it and fits perfectly with how you described the lyrics.

An idea could be to have a haunting low melody towards the end, ive played around with it a bit and this is what ive come up with, not the best but sort of gives you the idea of what it can do and what it could add

C4C https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1222647
Attachments:
Guitar Backing.gp5
ParadoxEmpire
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Join date: Jan 2009
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#3
We Actually Have A Different Outro But It's Impossible To Make In Guitar Pro Because Of Special Effects Limitations. The Gunshot Was A Nice Idea, Can't Believe We Never Thought Of That... Thanks. I'll Crit Back.
Rainy Afternoon
Dark Punk Piece
Dead On The Sand
C4C
Member Of Paradox Empire (Singer/Guitarist).
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dandan321
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Join date: Jul 2007
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#4
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Damn did anyone else read this as "Daft Punk Style song"?



LOL. I did, and then I was listening and kept asking myself how this sounded like Daft Punk. xD
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sfaune92
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Join date: Oct 2008
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#5
This is a great song, dude... Liked the chorus especially with the octave chords and that good punk bassline. What kind of vocal style do you guys have? and tell me if you get to record this once!

Overall, a great punk song. (i think you should use the other UG'ers idea for an outro, that was really genius lol).

Great Song, 10 of 10.

Would you mind C4C a lil' different song?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1222556

And it wasn't really that dark... That outro of the other UG'er gave it a kind of dark feeling at the end, maybe you should do something similar?
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herby190
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Join date: Mar 2008
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#7
Overall, I have no complaints. It was high-energy, catchy, and each individual instrument was well written. I have no complaints; 10/10. Let me know if your record it, because I'd love to hear it.

C4C? Both of the links in my sig need it, especially Projecta 43.
Austyn6661
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Join date: Feb 2008
277 IQ
#8
Yeah this is pretty bomb dude, fast-paced, and the choruds (or what I think it is) is AWESOME. My only qualm would be with the solo-thing, it just doesn't seem to click with the rest of the song. Don't really know how to describe it though, I just feel it could better. The triplet trem. picking was a nice touch, I really liked it.

9/10 broski, that was awesome.
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Paradox_Empire7
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2009
334 IQ
#9
Hey thanks for the comments (I wrote the song). I'm the lead guitarist of Paradox Empire and there's a newer version of the song and a new composition on this link .... https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1237124&highlight=Dark+Punk